A Bad Poem Containing a Thought I Had
What would it feel like to touch the sunset
To reach out to it's warmth and absorb the glow
For the golds to run through you
The pinks to cheer you
While the oranges and reds fill your soul
Like hot tea fills your belly
While enthralled with peace of the amber hues
To forget your woes far below
What would it be like to live in the sunset
To travel the globe and never let it go
posted by itshouldbsummer @ 4:25 PM
4 Comments:
pretty. did you write that or someone else?
very nice. reminds me of when we had to write question poems in literary. i wrote one about whether colors were different by perception.
so youre dissatisfied with it, judging by the subject...any intention of making another draft? like maybe someday when the semester is over? haha.
update definitely needed
you have been ambushed: http://ocrimsonxclovero.blogspot.com/2009/07/blog-ambush.html
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