I Should Be Doing Homework
My next class is in an hour and a half and I should really be working on the stuff that is due today... but forget that cause it's been way too long since I have posted. However I won't use all my time blogging so my plan is to type something I wrote a little while back hoping that that takes less time than coming up with something original to write.
Here are some poems from when I was sorta sad. But I'm not sad now, I'm just typing them now. Feel free to tell me if they are crap. I just like to write. Hey and the only way I'm going to get better at that is if someone tells me how much I stink at it now. Anyway...
Failing Fall
The skies are blue
The sun pours down
Dodging the pure white pillows of heaven
The trees aren't green
And can't hold on to their leaves
The golds and browns
The orange that shines
They can't match beauty with the bleeding trees
They feel like me
Letting go of part of them
For a season
Some span of time
They must feel the hurt of separation
Knowing that one day
All will be fresh and so good
And I miss you
And I hate this
I hate using words
And I hate being forced to fail at showing you my love
Uselessness
Elastic gone to dry-rot
Stretched and tearing
A brittle autum leaf
Afraid and shaking
Ashamed and crying
Worn out lace of an ice skate
Pulled it'll brake
A leaking canteen
Wasting water slow
Saddly watch it go
Will anyone ever know
But like I said if you have opinions you can certainly share them. If you don't that is also fine considering the fact that most everyone else has a life and not time to read such a boring pictureless post. Maybe I'll add some pictures when I get home and that would make people want to read it more. Then again maybe I won't because why would I want people to read this? Maybe I'm just loosing my mind and should go now. Later... to the cool people who had too much of a life to waste time reading this thing.
4 Comments:
Hmm, a trend of poetry being put up... I like the second one better, but neither of them are bad. If I can feel poetry, I say its good, and I felt those, so you have one-upped Naruta. :)
hey, um, Neruda is awesome.
I like...but they are sad...give me a few hour car ride with them and ill have something more intelligent to say.
your boyfriend is on crack.
What exactly makes you say I'm on crack?
beardman! lol thats all it was just random
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